【简答题】

英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
    The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting. I have been looking forward to relax myself and I’d like to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle. I think I can play football or play the chess with my father as well. How a wonderful time I will have during the winter holiday! But my father has differently opinions. He doesn’t want me to go out. He’s afraid that I’ll be knocked down a truck, fall into rivers, fall off a tree or fight with other. What’s worse, he’s afraid I will get lost. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. I need freedom but I will try to persuade my father.